Posted by: GreenEyes | 2007/04/18

Post yer Poetry...

Hi All...

thought maybe we could share our artistic talents with everyone... something different.

I wrote this awhile back for someone i fell madly in love with:

"Ripples of want, thread their way through me
The heart quickens
Flesh on fire, molten desire
Eyes ablaze with the beauty of you
Senses awakened by your touch
A kiss. A breath.
Your sweet caress
Mouth on mouth: Taste. Savour. Consume
Lay your hands on me
Unlock my secrets and show me yours
Let us drown in the pain of ecstasy
Two hearts beat as one.. as two... as one
The unbridled passion of love, lust and everything in-between"

Have a fantastic day all!


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Posted by: GreenEyes | 2007/04/19

Hey Jack... although,
that's not so say that it's as easy as that..... the ol' heart's still abit battered :)

Apart from that, seeing as no-one else wants to add their writing talents, guess i'm gonna have to add another one..

'Emotions. Devotions.
The revolution has begun.
The time is now.
Do you feel the pain? The madness?
Electricity in the air.
Kiss me.
Take my last breath.
My soul is ready to soar.'

Have a fantastic Thursday peeps :)


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Posted by: Jack Noir | 2007/04/18

That is does go on.

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Posted by: GreenEyes | 2007/04/18

Hi Jack... sadly not :(

but hey.... life does indeed go on!


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Posted by: Jack Noir | 2007/04/18

To: GreenEyes

Very sexy poem, did it wok out, the relationship I mean?

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Posted by: Gaby | 2007/04/18

Poet and I did not know it... LOL

Love it GreenEyes...

Just Fantastic!

Hugs Gaby

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